M:
I like this!! I think that the weapon does suit him! Just right to hack pony's cenataur off at the knees! lol sorry pony!!

what about some armour? maybe roman style quite chunky, lots of rivets and stuff?

Yellow shader definatley needs work but i think that yellow does work as a colour for him, what about looking at kurts model to get inspiration for the texture?

He kinda looks like the guy from tekken 3, Gon I think it was

Great stuff though

Pony:

Looking great man! I'm really looking forwards to seeing this character with the arrows and bow! I think you could get some really nice shots with arrows flying towards the camera's etc.

Great stuff guys

Alan