SimplyMaya Forums

Welcome to the forum, feel free to ask questions here.

Home / forum / Your Work / Work In Progress / Critique My feet Please!
Register FAQ Members List Calendar Mark Forums Read

New Thread
 
Thread Tools
Old 23-08-2006, 06:33 PM   #1
Anhslaught
Subscriber
 
Join Date: Jun 2004
Location: San Jose, CA
Posts: 490
Thanks: 0
Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts
Default Critique My feet Please!

Hey Guys,
I've been working on this feet and I need some critique. Right now to me it looks "ok", but I'm sure I'm not seeing something like a lot of you guys can see that are wrong or missing. So Please critique.
Anhslaught is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 23-08-2006, 06:33 PM   #2
Anhslaught
Subscriber
 
Join Date: Jun 2004
Location: San Jose, CA
Posts: 490
Thanks: 0
Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts
Default

Oops, I'm senile, I keep forgetting to attach.
Attached Thumbnails
Click image for larger version

Name:	feet.jpg
Views:	133
Size:	29.5 KB
ID:	30320  
Anhslaught is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 23-08-2006, 08:46 PM   #3
gster123
Moderator
 
gster123's Avatar
 
Join Date: May 2005
Location: Manchester Uk
Posts: 6,300
Thanks: 1
Thanked 51 Times in 45 Posts
Default

Looks good, any chance of a wire frame?
gster123 is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 23-08-2006, 08:56 PM   #4
Anhslaught
Subscriber
 
Join Date: Jun 2004
Location: San Jose, CA
Posts: 490
Thanks: 0
Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts
Default

Sure thing, here you go.
Attached Thumbnails
Click image for larger version

Name:	footwires.jpg
Views:	125
Size:	40.0 KB
ID:	30321  
Anhslaught is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 23-08-2006, 09:00 PM   #5
Galadiel
Subscriber
 
Galadiel's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jul 2006
Location: NRW, Germany
Posts: 141
Thanks: 0
Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post
Default

looks good so far! Keep it up. I want to see more updates from your feet. hehe

:attn:
Galadiel is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 23-08-2006, 10:47 PM   #6
Redmer
Subscriber
 
Redmer's Avatar
 
Join Date: May 2006
Location: Holland
Posts: 139
Thanks: 0
Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts
Default

i think the tose are bit wide of each other
and they seem a little thin to me
__________________
------------------- WIP ------------------


--------------- Finished Work -------------
Apache Helicopter
Armoured Personal Unit
Apache Finished
Ferrari 360
Mech
Redmer is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 23-08-2006, 11:13 PM   #7
NeoStrider
Registered User
 
NeoStrider's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jun 2004
Location: Cleveland, Ohio (USA)
Posts: 1,541
Thanks: 0
Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts
Default

looking at my own feet, my toes kinda curl onto each other... but at the same time that could be cause i happen to be too poor to afford shoes that fit (). looking at toe lengths they seem accurate, and looking at the wireframe i don't see any problems with topology. why don't you smooth it out just for us and make us feel privy?
__________________
Accept no substitutions.
NeoStrider is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 23-08-2006, 11:25 PM   #8
gster123
Moderator
 
gster123's Avatar
 
Join Date: May 2005
Location: Manchester Uk
Posts: 6,300
Thanks: 1
Thanked 51 Times in 45 Posts
Default

Nice going!

Like the nice clean mesh you've made.

Now, wheres the rest of the body to go with em??????

LOL
gster123 is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 23-08-2006, 11:34 PM   #9
NeoStrider
Registered User
 
NeoStrider's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jun 2004
Location: Cleveland, Ohio (USA)
Posts: 1,541
Thanks: 0
Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts
Default

oh and btw gster is just jealous cause his toes aren't great like ours are...


either that or he's got some great modeling factoid to share with us, cause what would a foot related post be without the GSTER!?!?! (totally making that up, but hey makes ya sound like an expert, eh, g? )
__________________
Accept no substitutions.
NeoStrider is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 23-08-2006, 11:36 PM   #10
Jay
Lead Modeler - Framestore
 
Jay's Avatar
 
Join Date: Feb 2003
Location: UK
Posts: 6,276
Thanks: 41
Thanked 428 Times in 384 Posts
Default

Mesh is good.

Feet vary alot, believe me, as I've had some strange responses to my models of feet but the one thing that needs doing right now is as NeoStrider said curl the toes inwards. Doing this will also reduce the space between each toe, which Redmer has pointed out too

Again, the amount of curling will depend on the references you have, I used my wifes as reference, she has pretty straight toes compared to alot of others Ive seen, but the little toe is the one that curls mostly.

Cheers
Jay
Jay is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 23-08-2006, 11:46 PM   #11
gster123
Moderator
 
gster123's Avatar
 
Join Date: May 2005
Location: Manchester Uk
Posts: 6,300
Thanks: 1
Thanked 51 Times in 45 Posts
Default

Quote:
Originally posted by NeoStrider
oh and btw gster is just jealous cause his toes aren't great like ours are...


either that or he's got some great modeling factoid to share with us, cause what would a foot related post be without the GSTER!?!?! (totally making that up, but hey makes ya sound like an expert, eh, g? )
Ha ha ha!!

I wasnt going to add anything other than what already was said.

So better to remain silent on a topic and be thought of as a fool than open your mouth and remove all doubt.
gster123 is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 23-08-2006, 11:50 PM   #12
NeoStrider
Registered User
 
NeoStrider's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jun 2004
Location: Cleveland, Ohio (USA)
Posts: 1,541
Thanks: 0
Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts
Default

which is even better if you're still at uni, you can tell the ladies that you need to see their feet for a modeling reference... (if they don't buy that tell them you're an illustration major looking for sketching for a prospective shoe conglomerate) and if that doesn't work, go to a party with lots of friends and just take pictures no matter what you need, cause eventually you'll find something that will fit your needs... be it feet in sandals, feet in high-heels, bare feet, etc. you'll need to see how the muscles in the feet react to their stimuli either way
__________________
Accept no substitutions.
NeoStrider is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 23-08-2006, 11:58 PM   #13
Anhslaught
Subscriber
 
Join Date: Jun 2004
Location: San Jose, CA
Posts: 490
Thanks: 0
Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts
Default

lol crazy conversation going on there about feet.

Anyhow, I widened the toes, curled the small ones, curled the small one a lot, added toe nails. I'll take a shot of the low poly too, it looks really wierd. I'm not sure how to make it look nice w/out all the extra loops. And aside from the toes, anything I can do with the feet itself and the ankle upwards?
Attached Thumbnails
Click image for larger version

Name:	subdfeet.jpg
Views:	103
Size:	13.8 KB
ID:	30323  
Anhslaught is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 24-08-2006, 12:02 AM   #14
Anhslaught
Subscriber
 
Join Date: Jun 2004
Location: San Jose, CA
Posts: 490
Thanks: 0
Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts
Default

Here's the body for the feet.
I'm not really working on it right now until I'm satisfied with the feet, but I wouldn't mind critiques on it also for future references.

I'lll be working on the hands next. After I attach them, I'll put some work into the arms and legs etc. I'm still trying to learn the anatomies soooo critiques are really appreciated.
Attached Thumbnails
Click image for larger version

Name:	untitled9.jpg
Views:	100
Size:	12.2 KB
ID:	30324  
Anhslaught is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 24-08-2006, 12:04 AM   #15
Anhslaught
Subscriber
 
Join Date: Jun 2004
Location: San Jose, CA
Posts: 490
Thanks: 0
Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts
Default

Bottom of the feet.

Anyhow, Thanks guys. Time for bed now
Attached Thumbnails
Click image for larger version

Name:	bottom.jpg
Views:	99
Size:	9.2 KB
ID:	30325  
Anhslaught is offline   Reply With Quote
New Thread

« Previous Thread | Next Thread »

Thread Tools

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

vB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off

1 Month

$34

Month-to-month billing
$34/month
Unlimited access to all videos
Project files to download
Easy to cancel at anytime
 
 

3 months

$87

Billing every 3 months
$29/month
Unlimited access to all videos
Project files to download
Easy to cancel at anytime
Save $5 per month or $15 in total compared to monthly billing with this package.

12 months

$288

Billing every 12 months
$24/month
Unlimited access to all videos
Project files to download
Easy to cancel at anytime
Save $10 per month or $120 in total compared to monthly billing with this package.

Your plan will automatically renew. You can cancel at any time via your PayPal account to avoid being charged again.

You can view the FAQ on our video plans here. You can contact us directly here. By clicking one of the buttons above, you agree to our Terms and Privacy Policy.