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Old 08-06-2007, 08:01 AM   #1
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Hi Guys I am new to this forum and here is my work for your C&C .Hope in future I'll put some more of my work.

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Old 08-06-2007, 08:48 AM   #2
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great start but you need to cut back alittle on the falling snow as its really hard to see the details on the building and the tree. I did not even see the boy there sitting at first
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Old 08-06-2007, 11:41 AM   #3
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Wow, it looks really good! I like the cartoony touch you made to it. I agree with tweety though, thereีs too much snow.
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yeah - and for the amount of snow there is - why isn't the roof covered with snow like the ground?

nice model though - lets see some more views!
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Old 08-06-2007, 09:47 PM   #5
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yeah - and for the amount of snow there is - why isn't the roof covered with snow like the ground?
Ever heard of a roof shovel? :p
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Old 09-06-2007, 12:49 AM   #6
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The newest thing in roof marketing
Snow-Ex shingle wipes from the makers of rainex

seriously, image looks nice; i agree about th esnow; too much, and possible flakes a bit too big
other then that good work
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Old 09-06-2007, 03:02 AM   #7
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Thanks guys for all your creative remarks I am sure it will help me in improving my work further.Snow looks bit odd may be b'coz it's a still image and you are unable to look the character but once you look this in a moving images with motion blur I think it will solve some of the problem ,but I 'll look into this .

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Old 11-06-2007, 04:13 PM   #8
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I think that the snow is in good quantities, but the flakes do need to be smaller. I also agree with the roof and ground snow level differences. Great stuff though! Do you have some kind of animation to go along with it or anything? Looks good! KUTGW!

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I like it alot. I think you did really well on adding irregularities to the scene like the windows, roof, chimney, etc.
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Old 11-06-2007, 10:50 PM   #10
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looks good man only crit is what tweetytunes said about the snow...

ive looked at this thread 4 times now and i just noticed theres a kid there
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Old 13-06-2007, 11:53 PM   #11
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yeah the snow is putting this render down atm, its really hard to tell whats in the scene without the snow blocking it :p

as acid just said in his comment, i just relised the kid AND also there is a satellite
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