that's a col referance image!
Yeah, I was wondering if the lines on the beak were supposed to be cracks - try ading a darker line underneath the white line and I think it will look more like a crack.
Also, i think if the white highlight on the eye was to overlap the pupil and the white of the eye, it would start to give it more depth.
keep at it! I like the blurry effect, but I think if you start to add some more sharper details this will really start to come together good!