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Old 11-07-2007, 08:34 AM   #1
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Default Car - Yay a car

Heres the start (im redoing the car now that i kinda know what im doing)
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Old 11-07-2007, 11:58 AM   #2
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Please, comments and critz (mainly critz because i want this lookin nice) I dont know why this render looks like its such bad quality!? I rendered it with 4 sample levels and mental ray!?
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Old 11-07-2007, 12:08 PM   #3
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dude,
looks good so far.

the reason its bad quality is because you saved it as a JPEG.
JPEG compression is horrible, and it inserts artifacts and noise and other stuff to decrease the file size...
i suggest you get used to it, lol,

or you save as a TGA and open it in photoshop and then save it as a JPEG




also,

what car is it supposed to be?
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Old 11-07-2007, 08:48 PM   #4
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So far im making it after the 350z since it has such a basic shape, but to make it harder ill be adding small things from other cars as well. I want to give it an old/new age look. ill be adding detail last. Also the sidepanels i might redo since they are so annoying...
and thanks, that does give better image quality!
PS: black ring gaming seems really cool, i was looking over it b4.
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Old 11-07-2007, 08:55 PM   #5
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ooh, i love how it looks now that its good quality, lol.

i actually dont have any crits though, i just think it looks good ^_^



but yeah, blackring studios is kind of on hold for awhile, haha.
but its an ongoing project, so we will continue ^_^
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wow great start, keep going
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Old 12-07-2007, 12:25 PM   #7
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Thanks for the comments, nice to know im doing it right so far! Heres what i did this morning so far. The lighting is horrible.
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Old 12-07-2007, 01:09 PM   #8
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coming along nicely, I need to get back to my dodge viper I did a while ago.

Can't wait to see the new old look that you said you were going for.
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Thanks camel, im going to attempt to put in an old feel with the Top of the car (so far its a bit sporty). I tweaked alot of things and added a small... under the door thing. Too tired to do anything else right now, will post more updates tomorrow as i really want to get this done.
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looks goo so far man kutgw
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Thanks:p ! I started modeling the back!
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lol i didnt mean to say looks goo...oops:p

looks slime

good work man
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I was wondering if I should be offended or assume it was good Thanks acid44!
Heres the start of the top thingy, still needs tweaking. Also, it doesnt look like the back alines with the back sidepanels, but its just the lighting.
EDIT:: Ok, i think im pretty much finished with this part (ofcourse ill do a once over once im done to smooth and even things out) but ill proceed onto the top now!
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working on the top now (just have to connect it to the body) then i can work on the windsheild, lights and details
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Looking good man are you using the pdf tut as your going along with the flow in that?

Just that if your not it might be good to have a look at it as it shows wires for cars, pretty good, and how to go about it.
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