First off all i want to say i like the things you've done.
There were a couple of things that i personally think needs improvement and/or change.
-music; the music is to dominant, and it is oriented at a certain taste of music.
The music also doesn't seem to fit in some parts of the showreel.
And i think that the combination of the forementioned things will be devastating for your reel.
-animation; when i looked at the clothsimulation i saw a lot off good animation. get rid off the clothsimulation-part, and add this part to the animation-part whilest, removing certain animations that aren't your best or just not as good as the others.