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Old 14-12-2007, 04:22 PM   #1
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i was working on this car modeling a month ago and i try to render it now ... expecting your comments to improve the render
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Old 14-12-2007, 04:24 PM   #2
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Old 14-12-2007, 05:40 PM   #3
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It looks pretty good, though it looks like the model itself could use a little TLC.... It looks as if it's been rear ended!... No offense.

As for tips on improving your Renders...... well first we gotta know what sort of a set up you are using.
what type of lighting, and textures, and all that stuff.
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yeah - what's happening with the rear? - it's looking a little bumpy. I think your shader needs a bit of work - it just looks like a blue shader at the moment. I would definitely change the color as well - that blue just seems a little too...boring .
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