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Old 14-06-2009, 04:51 PM   #1
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I've modeled these houses recently. It was modeled and textured in maya. Rendered with mental ray.
Hope you like it.

http://www.flickr.com/photos/39424458@N03/3625861146/

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Old 19-06-2009, 10:47 PM   #2
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Hey,
The scene looks really good my only crit would be it looks a little bland and blocky.

On your edges (on pretty much everything) add some detailing a little goes a long way to make the scene feel more believable. This is the same on your shadows a tree wouldnt normally have that harsh line on the shadows.

Final point - have you used any bump maps, if you have they are far to subtle so that i cant even tell.

Seems like a great start but i think you could get more out of it.

Tom
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Old 19-06-2009, 11:45 PM   #3
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i have to agree. i would say the door looks like it has not been modeled and it just a picture of a door... (on both doors)

and the background picture looks like its a confusing angle.
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Thanks, for the suggestions.
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