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Old 18-01-2010, 06:57 PM   #1
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like i've promised from the previous challenge that i'll join the next, so i better not break that promise

well i seem to have time on my hand till my semester starts, and this challenge just sounds awesome to join in.

i would say this challenge is ganna be quite hard but i'll try my best, what the heck i wanna learn so baddly after all.

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Old 18-01-2010, 07:17 PM   #2
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Hi Lion`I
Thats a realy good start, the nose looks good the side of the mouth were you have a laughter line sticking out could be smooth a bit with the smooth brush.............dave
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Old 19-01-2010, 06:00 AM   #3
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Thanks Dave

yeah it is popping out of place, i'll take care right away.

and a funny thing about the nose, when i first started working on the model i was like "damn how the hell am i ganna solve the nose part" so i said to my self if i can't fix the nose then i'm not ganna enter, so im guessing it's looking fine for a first post :attn:
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Old 20-01-2010, 07:35 PM   #4
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Update:

- played around with the ears

- the nose was a bit to high so i brought it down a bit, reduced its size, and smoothed the nose bridge.

- shaped the eyelids

- added something to the forehead and shaped it a bit

- fix the mouth like dave has suggest

And did an overall smooth to the whole model

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Hi Lion`I
The eyes look better, the jaw line looks more like a super heros, look at you photos of your self they are much softer...........hope this helps ............dave
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your right dave it is softer, thanks

alrighty here is another render


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Hi Lion`I
Your lighting or specularety is making it hard to see the detail of your model, could you change back to what you where using...............dave
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sry about that, here are a few better lights applied on it and a side by side Comparison

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Hi Lion`I
Looking good, soften the lower lip ( you can take a edge loop out if you are working in maya), jaw still looks to square soften that and just under the nose need softening.......hope this helps dave
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Thanks for directing me dave

anyways ive done quite a number of changes on this one and i hope its alot better

so now i think i might take it to zbrush to add the details

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