My first maya project!! Diner Time

# 1 02-11-2006 , 08:48 AM

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This is my very first maya work: user added image

Hope you like it user added image

Diner Time

Finished work: user added image

This is my finished work, edited in photoshop. user added image

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This is my finished render, not edited in photoshop. user added image

Looking forward to hear your comment :p

Greets Endura.

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# 2 02-11-2006 , 01:26 PM

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looks good. The lighting in the photoshopped version seems a bit off.

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# 3 02-11-2006 , 08:47 PM

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My first work wasnt that good user added image

great so far user added image

Crits: maybe the floor is too reflective and u should change the lightning... if u trained some, maybe u are able to enlighten the scene just with the candles, to create a very romantic mood user added image

atm it looks like some burglers are disturbing the diner with their flashlights user added image

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# 4 02-11-2006 , 08:51 PM

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Thanks!!!! user added image

Your absolutly right, it does look like burglers are disturbing the diner user added image

. lighting the scene is so hard for me at this moment, knowing wicht type of light to place where etc. user added image

ill keep on treaning and hope i get better in that user added image

Greets endura

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# 5 01-12-2006 , 01:06 PM

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For your first piece of work thats amazing. I think how you modeled the place was excellent. I really like the version just rendered because the lighting is to intense or something but I like how you lit the candles!

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# 6 01-12-2006 , 02:00 PM

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Good Job on your first attempt. As stated before the lighting is pretty poor. It looks like you have a single spotlight illuminating the entire scene?

Try using ambient lights on each candle set the colour to a light orange and turn on raytrace shadows foreach one to see if you get the right effect from the shadowing. Also keep the spot, but widen the cone area and and turn down its intensity and do not use shadows.

For me the biggest problem is light not falling on the table, the first place light would hit would be the table.

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