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Old 01-04-2011, 11:37 PM   #1
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For my portfolio I want a model of weapon and maybe animated exploded view of the gun. So i started modeling the Beretta 92. This is what i got so far.



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And this is my first attempt at photoshop and making textures.


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Let me know what you think and what could be improved.
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Old 02-04-2011, 08:36 AM   #2
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That looks nice Johndoe050, the only thing that is a little off is the trigger guard could do with some bevels to take of the edges...........dave
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Thats pretty damn good mate!! I agree with dave..some bevels and maybe just a couple of extra loops on the gard and tweak it to a slight rounder shape......well done man. With the textured one...it might be my screen but I reckon the lighting is 'flat' and the details are quite dark, Im no expert here so I will leave it at that.

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