The thing about Robot Chicken is, it's already been done. If you're going to bother to do something worth your time, do something original.
Here's some of my thoughts...
1) The white guys look very familiar. Is that character your design or did you 'borrow' it from somewhere? Can't think of who's reel I seen it on, but the main idea of it was that they made fun of the T pose in it. If I find it I'll post here.
2) The blue guy swinging his arm needs fixin'. His arm is all out of shape when he bends it. Unless he is following your idea of "cheesy" animation, then you hit it spot on. The T-Rex also needs some animation work.
3). I agree with everyone else in that there is absolutely no subject matter in it. If it's an intro to a show, then why not show some clips from the show?
I will say that I like your camera control. Very creative movement there.
The thing about beginning animators is that they tend to see things in their own mind that they think is kewl and expect the rest of us to also see it while giving us little information to go by. Your ideas might seem kewl to you, but unless your audience also thinks that, then you have failed.
There is a phrase that, as an animator, you must live by... "Show us, don't tell us". Your films must express fully your ideas and insights rather than leave us asking questions or have us guessing as to what you were trying to express.
Oh, and don't knock the bouncing ball animations. ALL beginning animators should do it. It's the basis for learning timing, anticipation, weight, squash & stretch, as well as a few other principles of animation. Anyone can bounce the ball, but not everyone can animate it. Can you? I sure would like to see you try.
As for the name of the thread... eh... I'm 50/50 on it. You're welcome to name it what you like, but it would be more helpful to put a subject to it. Something like... "Animation: Critiques & Comments Please". Also something in the body of the message would be nice. Posting anonymous links could be misconstrued as an attempt to defraud the TOS here and get you banned. Please include at least a description next time.
Dave Baer
Professor of Digital Arts
Digital Media Arts College
Boca Raton, Florida
dbaer@dmac.edu