Beer glass scene creation
This course contains a little bit of everything with modeling, UVing, texturing and dynamics in Maya, as well as compositing multilayered EXR's in Photoshop.
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19-05-2006
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Need some serious critiques
This new one will be a big contrast so I'd appreciate some feedback. I want this one to be a simpler, more elegant layout that will show my work off more and be easier to navigate. So how's it look so far ?
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19-05-2006
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How will you apply this to that gallery?? Will the images pop up in a seperate window?
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19-05-2006
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19-05-2006
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The only thing that I could say is thet you might have a bit of wasted space in the bottom right corner of the blog, but if its not an issure its not a problem!
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19-05-2006
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here's some critique,
I think the interface looks confusing, (in a way that I don't know where to look first) I would restrict myself only to the stuff that is really needed. (the zen approach) All those round things at the edges of your windows are distracting a bit. Are they frames for buttons? It all reminds me to much of some space fighter interior.
Also I am not sure abou the type. The distance between each letter seems to be to wide. It is very subtle but something like this can make a big difference to reading performance and people actually finishing reading a text.
https://www.hyperkit.co.uk
is a very simple but effective and easy to navigate web page, I am not saying make your website like theirs but I added this more to explain what I meant.
if you want to look at something more elaborate but yet effective check out
https://www.peepshow.org.uk/ (THIS IS NO LINK TO A PORN SITE!!!)
I hope I didn't trash it to much, as I can see that you put a lot of effort in it already, but as you asked for serious critique I thought I mention what comes to my mind.
Also, it doesn't look bad. I can see you thought about layout coulour etc. it is just that it could work better with a little tweaking.
good luck
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19-05-2006
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If you stick with this design, I might add another colour just to define the frames.
Also, I think the name of your site needs a bit more space, just to make it look less squeezed in.
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22-05-2006
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