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16-12-2005
, 05:57 PM
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Lol, its pretty good. Not excellent, but good.
Ive been writing some stuff on Hairy Pot-head (you know what that is a parody of) myself, and I think your idea is good. Well anyway, keep it up, sounds k00l.
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16-12-2005
, 10:55 PM
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I'll probably put up the rest of the chapter later on today. I wanted to do it yesterday but my brother told me to get of the computer before hitting me.
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16-12-2005
, 11:04 PM
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your styles pretty good although i think the name faggot could be changed it could get quite annoying reading that word so much, maybe a simple name like bOb
Also more description of the guys like what they look like etc could b brought into it?
hope this helps
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16-12-2005
, 11:20 PM
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That was actually after the description of the charachters, i'll post that bit up in a sec. I'll be keeping Faggot's name though because it describes his charachter
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16-12-2005
, 11:33 PM
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Heres the complete first chapter.
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17-12-2005
, 05:14 AM
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Most people won't appreciate the name faggot and will not even bother to look at the book.
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17-12-2005
, 05:52 AM
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allright, i'll change his name.:nod: I could use some suggestions though
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17-12-2005
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hi , is faggot the music instrument or does it have an other meaning in english?
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17-12-2005
, 09:27 PM
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it means a homosexual.
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17-12-2005
, 09:41 PM
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Originally posted by gohan1842
Most people won't appreciate the name faggot and will not even bother to look at the book.
i think if he wants to use it as a double-entendre he can play with the sp[elling a bit and he should not be a problem to most. something like fahgott, or fagg'ot or along those lines.
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17-12-2005
, 10:42 PM
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Would it be worthwhile to have the full name faggot and have the other charecters call him fag, or somthing?
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