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This course contains a little bit of everything with modeling, UVing, texturing and dynamics in Maya, as well as compositing multilayered EXR's in Photoshop.

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# 1 19-07-2006 , 11:54 PM

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Hi Guys Please give some productive critic on this one

(keeping in mind it´s my first ~finished project

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# 2 20-07-2006 , 12:23 AM

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hmm gif dont look that good, so i´ve made a jpg in .rar

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# 3 20-07-2006 , 07:02 AM

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looks pretty nice
only it looks like the sun/star isn't looking complete round?
or is that just me

------------------- WIP ------------------

--------------- Finished Work -------------
Apache Helicopter
Armoured Personal Unit
Apache Finished
Ferrari 360
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# 4 20-07-2006 , 10:57 AM

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well. It is a sphere, that iv´e just maked some noise on, so it should be user added image

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# 5 20-07-2006 , 11:18 AM

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Good First Attempt.

Color of the sun seems a bit off to me maybe that's giving the effect of it being slightly non circular, could be the noise too. Did you use a RAMP Shader? For me I would have and put the colors to orange, yellow and then black.

Maybe some subtle effects off of the surface of the sun to create the constant flares, and a lens flare. Just ideas...

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