I can't see much, too dark.

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its only that wall thats been textured

okay got a bit bored with laying out uv's for the scene so i started modelling the main character torso is on its way arms and hands still need a fair bit of work havn't started the head or the wings and the legs are just extruded cubes at the moment but umm c&c would be great lol

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close render of tooth fairy still needing a lot of work and i will be taking him into z-brush to refine but i like getting a good representation in maya first havn't been using z for that long and im comfortable with maya so

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Why cubes instead of a cylinder? The arms definitely need work, they have a kind of rubber chicken thing going on right now. And that's may C&C <3

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cheers gect they are kinda rubber chicken hey lol

did a little more work to the arms

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i like your hard surface modelling very nice.

The character itself i would suggest, looking at some hand references, at the moment they look a bit playdoy.

I like the overal shape where it is heading keep it up this way.

Also look on to how old man look like.

Give yourself the following questions.

Is he fat?
Was he ever fat? if he ever was you see lots of hanging skin
Is he bony?
Dose he have a disease.
Is he hary?

and so you can see from just my basic questions it actually involves in allot of detail work for the character. It gives your character personality.

So try to find more of these questions for yourself.

Hope it helps!

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the gut looks weird and pointy, can you show the wireframe? looks like you need more edge loops or something to make it look round

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ok a bit more work ill have a wire up soon chirone and i think your right though it is a bit of a perspective problem as well but ill get on it here are some more renders of the model

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Wow that guy has a serious beer gut lol.

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theirs a lot of years of work on that beer gut but hey hes the tooth fairy he takes teeth then what else foes he have to do lol. Heres more updates he has hands now lol but now i have to start the head soon not really looking forward to it, kinda can make it or really really ruin it but hey ill see how it goes c&c always welcome

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you should stretch the arms more
the part witht he biceps and triceps that is.... i would give a proper name but i dont know it yet.

i dont know if it's the angle that make his gut look pointy... you can clearly see a constant colour change around him and it looks weird...

maybe it's not a problem with edge loops but maybe you need to make him taller so the gut goes down more?

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