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Hygami · 03-12-2008, 10:10 AM

Hey guys

so after i got help in the newbie section in some parts

i'm now happy to present you my first hnad model an my first model in maya

hope you like it crittique
is welcome of course!

BennyK · 03-12-2008, 11:09 AM

Very nice!
Is it WIP of Finished?
Are you going to texture it?
Benny

Hygami · 03-12-2008, 11:46 AM

thanks

it's actually a practice
i don't know how to texture yet
I'll keep on focusing on modeling the next few month or should i lern both at the same time?

honestdom · 03-12-2008, 12:42 PM

it looks pretty good, you should post up some wires.

i think the thumb on the first image looks a little odd, its maybe a bit short and the skin around the base of it seems bloated some what. that could just be the angle tho.

arran · 03-12-2008, 02:47 PM

not bad, but hammer.horror is right - there's definitely issue with the thumb - the stretch of skin that goes from the middle of the main body to the base of the thumb looks like it starts too high. also, in the last image, it really looks like the whole thumb has been pulled out too far and then rotated round too much. it almost looks disjointed.

lets see some wires.

NeoStrider · 04-12-2008, 01:28 AM

agree with the thumb issue, but have to add that the fingertips (not the very ends but the all around area of the final knuckle of the finger) looks a little boxy and too long from top of finger to bottom of finger.

Hygami · 04-12-2008, 05:41 AM

Thank you and I appreciate your crits,
I'll work on that thumb and the fingers

here is the wireframe

Hygami · 05-12-2008, 11:25 AM

after listening to your advice i modeled a new hand

took my own hand an also did from observation from parts i couldn't see on the ref.

it was alot faster than the last one which I'm happy about

Mayaniac · 06-12-2008, 04:45 AM

Hey, that looks allot better.

I think that maybe the palm is a tad bit too long though.

Nice work.

arran · 06-12-2008, 09:57 AM

yeah - was thinking the same thing - as mayaniac said - definitely looking a lot better. time to get going on the rest of him.

Hygami · 06-12-2008, 10:15 AM

thanks alot guys!!

I was thinking about "get going" but i don't know where to start. is the head a good thing to be working on as next or the body?

I'm start loving this community

arran · 06-12-2008, 10:17 AM

you could start blocking out the basic body and then focus on the various parts - the head is always a good place to start tho.

NeoStrider · 09-12-2008, 02:37 PM

great improvement... nice job.

tweetytunes · 09-12-2008, 03:06 PM

I hate hands - and feet

but this is looking very nice well done

03-12-2008, 10:10 AM	#1
Hygami Registered User Join Date: Jan 2008 Posts: 30	My first 3D Hand model Hey guys so after i got help in the newbie section in some parts i'm now happy to present you my first hnad model an my first model in maya hope you like it crittique is welcome of course! Attached Thumbnails
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03-12-2008, 11:09 AM	#2
BennyK Registered User Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: IL Posts: 738	Very nice! Is it WIP of Finished? Are you going to texture it? Benny __________________ When in doubt, delete history and freeze transformations. My latest snake game (Requires DirectX9 SDK and Framework)
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03-12-2008, 11:46 AM	#3
Hygami Registered User Join Date: Jan 2008 Posts: 30	thanks it's actually a practice i don't know how to texture yet I'll keep on focusing on modeling the next few month or should i lern both at the same time?
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03-12-2008, 12:42 PM	#4
honestdom The Nurb Herd Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: London Posts: 2,381	it looks pretty good, you should post up some wires. i think the thumb on the first image looks a little odd, its maybe a bit short and the skin around the base of it seems bloated some what. that could just be the angle tho.
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03-12-2008, 02:47 PM	#5
arran Registered User Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Brooklyn, NY Posts: 3,708	not bad, but hammer.horror is right - there's definitely issue with the thumb - the stretch of skin that goes from the middle of the main body to the base of the thumb looks like it starts too high. also, in the last image, it really looks like the whole thumb has been pulled out too far and then rotated round too much. it almost looks disjointed. lets see some wires. __________________ arran3D arran3D blog
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04-12-2008, 01:28 AM	#6
NeoStrider Registered User Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: Cleveland, Ohio (USA) Posts: 1,541	agree with the thumb issue, but have to add that the fingertips (not the very ends but the all around area of the final knuckle of the finger) looks a little boxy and too long from top of finger to bottom of finger. __________________ Accept no substitutions.
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04-12-2008, 05:41 AM	#7
Hygami Registered User Join Date: Jan 2008 Posts: 30	Thank you and I appreciate your crits, I'll work on that thumb and the fingers here is the wireframe Attached Thumbnails
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05-12-2008, 11:25 AM	#8
Hygami Registered User Join Date: Jan 2008 Posts: 30	after listening to your advice i modeled a new hand took my own hand an also did from observation from parts i couldn't see on the ref. it was alot faster than the last one which I'm happy about Attached Thumbnails
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06-12-2008, 04:45 AM	#9
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06-12-2008, 09:57 AM	#10
arran Registered User Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Brooklyn, NY Posts: 3,708	yeah - was thinking the same thing - as mayaniac said - definitely looking a lot better. time to get going on the rest of him. __________________ arran3D arran3D blog
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06-12-2008, 10:15 AM	#11
Hygami Registered User Join Date: Jan 2008 Posts: 30	thanks alot guys!! I was thinking about "get going" but i don't know where to start. is the head a good thing to be working on as next or the body? I'm start loving this community
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06-12-2008, 10:17 AM	#12
arran Registered User Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Brooklyn, NY Posts: 3,708	you could start blocking out the basic body and then focus on the various parts - the head is always a good place to start tho. __________________ arran3D arran3D blog
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09-12-2008, 02:37 PM	#13
NeoStrider Registered User Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: Cleveland, Ohio (USA) Posts: 1,541	great improvement... nice job. __________________ Accept no substitutions.
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09-12-2008, 03:06 PM	#14
tweetytunes Subscriber Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Bolton - UK Posts: 2,456	I hate hands - and feet but this is looking very nice well done __________________
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