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28-07-2007, 04:26 AM   #1
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Patrick Star....
Hi all Maya Users. I'm new around here just started using Maya like 1 month ago and I've been mostly learning everything from tuts over the net. so what i learned so far was this simply character design.

I just had 2 make Patrick star, as u all know he's from sponge bob square pants animation cartoon.

Hope u guyz like it and please dont hate me so much if i didnt do it so well, as u can see this is my first post if im not mistaken. So Enjoy!

P.s. Plz criticizes it, i wanna know more, really wanna learn!

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28-07-2007, 04:27 AM   #2
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Here is more of Patrick
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28-07-2007, 04:28 AM   #3
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Close up
Closer!
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28-07-2007, 04:39 AM   #4
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good job! nice overall, but i dont think patrick is That fat. Unless he scarfed down some SeaTwinkies before he surfaced. His tongue makes him look like hes gagging a bit also.
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28-07-2007, 04:47 AM   #5
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thanks man, yeah i know the tongue part was driving me crazy, sometimes i put the lip 2 low then the tongue wont be shown or i push the tongue back it starts 2 look weird so i pretty much gave up on it :headbang: ... lol

what do u think i should do it make it look good?
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28-07-2007, 05:07 AM   #6
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id say stretch him out a bit, make him taller. Give him a nice cartoony tongue and tighten his shorts!
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28-07-2007, 05:10 AM   #7
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Ok then i'll get right into it. Thanks a lot

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28-07-2007, 05:17 AM   #8
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Haha lol looks good. I think that you should raise his head a bit though. It looks a little too close to his neck.
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28-07-2007, 06:07 AM   #9
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Ok, i'm done lol, i just had 2 work on it, i did on what u said (kinddoggofwar), i made him taller and fixed his tongue so wat do u think of it now?

and yeah AnthonyCg, hmm yeah but Patrick doesnt have a neck doesn't he or does he? im not so sure

well anyways check out the new images maybe be i'd look way better.
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28-07-2007, 06:09 AM   #10
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this one too...
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28-07-2007, 07:24 AM   #11
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I think it looks tons better, maybe just define the belly button more and work on his shorts!
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28-07-2007, 10:35 AM   #12
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I guess Patrick doesn't really have a neck, but I think you got the picture. Looks better. Perhaps you could throw his rock in there?
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28-07-2007, 11:57 AM   #13
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lol yeah i think i should work on the belly button, it seems out of place.

hmmmm ur right his Rock thanks for the reminder lol

THanks alot for the help guyz :bow:

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29-07-2007, 02:41 AM   #14
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Ok, thats it. THATS the Final ONE OF Patrick Star. Hope u guyz Like it lol

and once again thanks for the info guyz, really helped me alot.



Here Is Patrick right Next 2 his Rock :p :p
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30-07-2007, 03:44 AM   #15
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looks good
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