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backstabbing · 28-07-2007, 04:26 AM

Hi all Maya Users. I'm new around here just started using Maya like 1 month ago and I've been mostly learning everything from tuts over the net. so what i learned so far was this simply character design.

I just had 2 make Patrick star, as u all know he's from sponge bob square pants animation cartoon.

Hope u guyz like it and please dont hate me so much if i didnt do it so well, as u can see this is my first post if im not mistaken. So Enjoy!

P.s. Plz criticizes it, i wanna know more, really wanna learn!

Cheers

backstabbing · 28-07-2007, 04:27 AM

Here is more of Patrick

backstabbing · 28-07-2007, 04:28 AM

Closer!

kinddoggofwar · 28-07-2007, 04:39 AM

good job! nice overall, but i dont think patrick is That fat. Unless he scarfed down some SeaTwinkies before he surfaced. His tongue makes him look like hes gagging a bit also.

backstabbing · 28-07-2007, 04:47 AM

thanks man, yeah i know the tongue part was driving me crazy, sometimes i put the lip 2 low then the tongue wont be shown or i push the tongue back it starts 2 look weird so i pretty much gave up on it :headbang: ... lol

what do u think i should do it make it look good?

kinddoggofwar · 28-07-2007, 05:07 AM

id say stretch him out a bit, make him taller. Give him a nice cartoony tongue and tighten his shorts!

backstabbing · 28-07-2007, 05:10 AM

Ok then i'll get right into it. Thanks a lot

Cheers

AnthonyCg · 28-07-2007, 05:17 AM

Haha lol looks good. I think that you should raise his head a bit though. It looks a little too close to his neck.

backstabbing · 28-07-2007, 06:07 AM

Ok, i'm done lol, i just had 2 work on it, i did on what u said (kinddoggofwar), i made him taller and fixed his tongue so wat do u think of it now?

and yeah AnthonyCg, hmm yeah but Patrick doesnt have a neck doesn't he or does he? im not so sure

well anyways check out the new images maybe be i'd look way better.

backstabbing · 28-07-2007, 06:09 AM

this one too...

kinddoggofwar · 28-07-2007, 07:24 AM

I think it looks tons better, maybe just define the belly button more and work on his shorts!

AnthonyCg · 28-07-2007, 10:35 AM

I guess Patrick doesn't really have a neck, but I think you got the picture. Looks better. Perhaps you could throw his rock in there?

backstabbing · 28-07-2007, 11:57 AM

lol yeah i think i should work on the belly button, it seems out of place.

hmmmm ur right his Rock thanks for the reminder lol

THanks alot for the help guyz :bow:

Cheers

backstabbing · 29-07-2007, 02:41 AM

Ok, thats it. THATS the Final ONE OF Patrick Star. Hope u guyz Like it lol

and once again thanks for the info guyz, really helped me alot.

Here Is Patrick right Next 2 his Rock :p :p

kinddoggofwar · 30-07-2007, 03:44 AM

looks good

28-07-2007, 04:26 AM	#1
backstabbing Registered User Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Malaysia Posts: 127	Patrick Star.... Hi all Maya Users. I'm new around here just started using Maya like 1 month ago and I've been mostly learning everything from tuts over the net. so what i learned so far was this simply character design. I just had 2 make Patrick star, as u all know he's from sponge bob square pants animation cartoon. Hope u guyz like it and please dont hate me so much if i didnt do it so well, as u can see this is my first post if im not mistaken. So Enjoy! P.s. Plz criticizes it, i wanna know more, really wanna learn! Cheers Attached Thumbnails Last edited by backstabbing : 28-07-2007 at 04:29 AM.

28-07-2007, 04:27 AM	#2
backstabbing Registered User Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Malaysia Posts: 127	More Images Here is more of Patrick Attached Thumbnails

28-07-2007, 04:28 AM	#3
backstabbing Registered User Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Malaysia Posts: 127	Close up Closer! Attached Thumbnails

28-07-2007, 04:39 AM	#4
kinddoggofwar Registered User Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: New Jersey Posts: 354	good job! nice overall, but i dont think patrick is That fat. Unless he scarfed down some SeaTwinkies before he surfaced. His tongue makes him look like hes gagging a bit also. __________________ Yay, not a freshman anymore!

28-07-2007, 05:07 AM	#6
kinddoggofwar Registered User Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: New Jersey Posts: 354	id say stretch him out a bit, make him taller. Give him a nice cartoony tongue and tighten his shorts! __________________ Yay, not a freshman anymore!

28-07-2007, 04:47 AM	#5
backstabbing Registered User Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Malaysia Posts: 127	thanks man, yeah i know the tongue part was driving me crazy, sometimes i put the lip 2 low then the tongue wont be shown or i push the tongue back it starts 2 look weird so i pretty much gave up on it :headbang: ... lol what do u think i should do it make it look good?

28-07-2007, 05:10 AM	#7
backstabbing Registered User Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Malaysia Posts: 127	Ok then i'll get right into it. Thanks a lot Cheers

28-07-2007, 05:17 AM	#8
AnthonyCg Registered User Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Washington D.C Posts: 620	Haha lol looks good. I think that you should raise his head a bit though. It looks a little too close to his neck. __________________ "The reasonable man adapts himself to the world; the unreasonable one persists in trying to adapt the world to himself. Therefore all progress depends on the unreasonable man." George Bernard Shaw - Man and Superman

28-07-2007, 06:07 AM	#9
backstabbing Registered User Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Malaysia Posts: 127	Ok, i'm done lol, i just had 2 work on it, i did on what u said (kinddoggofwar), i made him taller and fixed his tongue so wat do u think of it now? and yeah AnthonyCg, hmm yeah but Patrick doesnt have a neck doesn't he or does he? im not so sure well anyways check out the new images maybe be i'd look way better. Attached Thumbnails

28-07-2007, 06:09 AM	#10
backstabbing Registered User Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Malaysia Posts: 127	this one too... Attached Thumbnails

28-07-2007, 07:24 AM	#11
kinddoggofwar Registered User Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: New Jersey Posts: 354	I think it looks tons better, maybe just define the belly button more and work on his shorts! __________________ Yay, not a freshman anymore!

28-07-2007, 10:35 AM	#12
AnthonyCg Registered User Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Washington D.C Posts: 620	I guess Patrick doesn't really have a neck, but I think you got the picture. Looks better. Perhaps you could throw his rock in there? __________________ "The reasonable man adapts himself to the world; the unreasonable one persists in trying to adapt the world to himself. Therefore all progress depends on the unreasonable man." George Bernard Shaw - Man and Superman

28-07-2007, 11:57 AM	#13
backstabbing Registered User Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Malaysia Posts: 127	lol yeah i think i should work on the belly button, it seems out of place. hmmmm ur right his Rock thanks for the reminder lol THanks alot for the help guyz :bow: Cheers Last edited by backstabbing : 29-07-2007 at 01:24 AM.

29-07-2007, 02:41 AM	#14
backstabbing Registered User Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Malaysia Posts: 127	Ok, thats it. THATS the Final ONE OF Patrick Star. Hope u guyz Like it lol and once again thanks for the info guyz, really helped me alot. Here Is Patrick right Next 2 his Rock :p :p Attached Thumbnails

30-07-2007, 03:44 AM	#15
kinddoggofwar Registered User Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: New Jersey Posts: 354	looks good __________________ Yay, not a freshman anymore!