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![]() Hi all Maya Users. I'm new around here just started using Maya like 1 month ago and I've been mostly learning everything from tuts over the net. so what i learned so far was this simply character design.
I just had 2 make Patrick star, as u all know he's from sponge bob square pants animation cartoon. Hope u guyz like it and please dont hate me so much if i didnt do it so well, as u can see this is my first post if im not mistaken. So Enjoy! P.s. Plz criticizes it, i wanna know more, really wanna learn! Cheers ![]() Last edited by backstabbing : 28-07-2007 at 04:29 AM. |
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![]() Here is more of Patrick
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![]() Closer!
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![]() good job! nice overall, but i dont think patrick is That fat. Unless he scarfed down some SeaTwinkies before he surfaced. His tongue makes him look like hes gagging a bit also.
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![]() thanks man, yeah i know the tongue part was driving me crazy, sometimes i put the lip 2 low then the tongue wont be shown or i push the tongue back it starts 2 look weird so i pretty much gave up on it :headbang: ... lol
what do u think i should do it make it look good? |
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![]() id say stretch him out a bit, make him taller. Give him a nice cartoony tongue and tighten his shorts!
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![]() Ok then i'll get right into it. Thanks a lot
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![]() Haha lol looks good. I think that you should raise his head a bit though. It looks a little too close to his neck.
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![]() Ok, i'm done lol, i just had 2 work on it, i did on what u said (kinddoggofwar), i made him taller and fixed his tongue so wat do u think of it now?
and yeah AnthonyCg, hmm yeah but Patrick doesnt have a neck doesn't he or does he? im not so sure well anyways check out the new images maybe be i'd look way better. |
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![]() this one too...
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![]() I think it looks tons better, maybe just define the belly button more and work on his shorts!
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![]() I guess Patrick doesn't really have a neck, but I think you got the picture. Looks better. Perhaps you could throw his rock in there?
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![]() lol yeah i think i should work on the belly button, it seems out of place.
hmmmm ur right his Rock thanks for the reminder lol THanks alot for the help guyz :bow: Cheers ![]() Last edited by backstabbing : 29-07-2007 at 01:24 AM. |
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![]() Ok, thats it. THATS the Final ONE OF Patrick Star. Hope u guyz Like it lol
and once again thanks for the info guyz, really helped me alot. Here Is Patrick right Next 2 his Rock :p :p |
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![]() looks good
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