The lip looks better as it's not stretched. I think you should hold off on the cut. Just doesn't make it look as real in my opinion.

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Much better, but over the eye still looks a little, "fake". Maybe try a bump map or push in the faces there a little before adding the texture, make it more bloody and animalistic...

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thanx guy.i tried to add fur to him.a very very fast render with maya software.i will probably use these setting when i will render with mr.if someone think that it looks bad,let me know.

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wow, thats awesome!

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I think the fur is a little long and doesnt follow the direction of the fur in the reference pic. e.g, the cheek fur flows downwards, not backwards (it's looking like a gorilla/baboon hybrid with the fur like that)

good progress though!

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Great work mc-fleury! The fur has really brought your model together.

Really a good fur start MacFleury, I like the grays and black.
Will ya add some other brown variations or keep it black-gray all over the head ?. Would be really nice having these browns too

Well, only a question of color, not really smthg to change.

thanx a lot guy!i was just a test so it will surely be a little better in the final version.

pyrus:i think the colors will stsy like that.
t1ck:i will change the directio of the fur and make it shorter.

thanx for all these great comment!

i need to know if i should change the skin color for something more grey.

yea and u need to get a bump map in there for the skin

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i will do the bump map later.should i change the skin color.

Yeah, the skin should be lighter, more light grey, I suggest that if you try to do all of his skin though and it shows through the fur, then either increase the fur or just color in his mouth and face...

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The fur itself looks great.

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I agree...looking great mcfluery!

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