Groover_landing

# 1 15-08-2003 , 10:13 PM

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This is my 2nd ever animation, and Im looking for crits. I was told this is THE Maya forum... so fingers crossed...

And here is a rendered vid....

https://www.craigcrane.com/3Dworld/groover_landing.wmv

It was a rushed affair, but I do know some things I would like to change...

There is an arm sticking through the cockpit as it lands (sorted though)

Ship looks a little outta control at start

Landing is a tad to abrupt...

But, if you see anything else please let me know...

Cheers

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# 2 15-08-2003 , 10:49 PM

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Besides the points you already mentioned, I just have to say it would be great if there were some more points of reference in the background, it's hard to judge movement.

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# 3 18-08-2003 , 06:08 PM

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UPDATE:

Just been re-doing the ship. What do ya think?

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# 4 29-08-2003 , 06:23 PM

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evening!

Just thought I'd post an update....

I tried to add the logo's using projection, but it got all screwy and logos were appearing on the other side as well, but in reverse. So, I just cut up the surface and applied shaders with image files attached... But I am happy thus far...

Does anyone know why it was so screwy with Projections?

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