[charakter] first try

# 1 07-04-2004 , 09:50 PM

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Hi all,

Ok, to learn how to handle Polys i startet a Charakter. Well, had a few problems till now. *G* But after one Week (no, not the whole day, just a few hours a day) i am more less so far to show it to you guys. user added image

Really, after looking hours and hours to the char i am so.. mhm... confused... i can´t tell if the anatomie is correkt or not. Sometimes the head seems to small or the hands to big... or... ah... don´t know. Maybe you know what i mean. user added image

That´s why i need your help guys. Please tell me whats wrong with it! Something is definitly wrong but i don´t see WHAT. user added image

The Head itself is also not correkt. but again i don´t know what to change. Well, please have a look at it

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I made the Body only till the image ends (will work on it tomorrow). so please do not ask for the feet. *G*

thx sooo much for your help!

Martin

ps.: again my englisch.. sorry for that. user added image

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# 2 07-04-2004 , 10:14 PM

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wow you did that? looks awesome! VN!

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# 3 07-04-2004 , 11:09 PM

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Looks greate !

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# 4 08-04-2004 , 01:02 AM

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Definitely not bad at all.

Couple things:

The division between the arm and torso is too sharp. The line from the pectoral muscle should flow into the bicep pretty smoothly.

The pectorals seem to droop too low. I'd raise them up a bit.

The neck seems to pinch too thin... I'd have it flow into the torso more.

Overall, I think it looks good, skill-wise, but the major problems all seem to be general anatomy issues. I'd recomend looking up some anatomy images to use for reference for having the muscle groups flow together and such.

Looks good! Keep it up!

-Mike
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# 5 08-04-2004 , 02:09 AM

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head should be bigger n hands smaller i think ..if you like accuracy why not look at an anatomy bok ,otherwise the model is great!!!

Alpha Gamma Sygma.

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# 6 08-04-2004 , 07:08 AM

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thanks so much for your comments.

yes, the anatomy. i have a few reference images here but it is quite hard to do it like that. user added image

@mtmckinley: thx a lot. i will change what right now..

that do you think about the head. are the proportions right?

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# 7 08-04-2004 , 08:00 AM

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ok, mayde a few very quick changes to it.

i changed the Head a bit and set the breast up a bit.

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# 8 08-04-2004 , 03:34 PM

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ok, changed a few things.

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# 9 10-04-2004 , 05:13 AM

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Looks great! keep up the good work!
-- Dan

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# 10 10-04-2004 , 12:37 PM

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thx a lot. user added image

started with the legs

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# 11 10-04-2004 , 04:03 PM

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Looking good! is it me or does the torso look streached? and the leg roundness.

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# 12 10-04-2004 , 05:33 PM

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he has female hips... i'd sort them shits out :|

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# 13 13-04-2004 , 07:30 AM

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ok, work one more hour on it. don´t have more time at the moment. user added image

Did only some minor tweaking.

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@dragonsfire: sorry for my poor english, but what do you mean with streached? stretched?

@Zyk0tiK: yeah you are right. have to change that soon. user added image

Last edited by Auctor; 13-04-2004 at 07:40 AM.

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