Beer glass scene creation
This course contains a little bit of everything with modeling, UVing, texturing and dynamics in Maya, as well as compositing multilayered EXR's in Photoshop.
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05-04-2013
, 09:09 AM
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The answer to getting the nose right isnt from looking at another set of polys...just google some noses, all shapes n sizes and pick one (not literally) LOL.
I love the idea of this model though. My only crit apart from the nose would be to slim the face down a little but more because you have separated the features the roundness of the face is more prominent...if that makes sense
otherwise good going dude! good to have you back modelling
I may get my red pen out later and do a few a suggestion mark ups over the image
Jay
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05-04-2013
, 08:36 PM
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please do , any constructive help is welcomed.
I may get my red pen out later and do a few a suggestion mark ups over the image
Jay
okay i can understand your point about slimming the face down,but i would be off reference and i am worried about proportion now..lol human anatomy is not my strongest suit.
Thank you jay for the C & C I was hoping you might appear sometime.
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05-04-2013
, 09:34 PM
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I did a quick sketch, over yours as to how I'd tweak it, I understand if you have ref, but just a few little tweaks that I did were such as rotating the eys back in toward the nose and making them a little bigger, slim the face or square it off and give the lips more definition.
I still love the idea but the little things are as mentioned, it may help you I dont know mate, but keep it up, and remember use real ref not some old bunch of recommended polys off some elses post. Never a good idea, topo might be nice but design is always objective
cheers
Jay
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