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Old 07-07-2004, 05:01 PM   #1
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please some crit !!!
hi...i read through the ford focus tutorial but didn't make all they said...
this is just a wip so I will change the tires and the shader on the car(the reflectivity is a bit too high) and I will surely smooth it one more time...

that's enough of writing, here's the picture...

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Old 07-07-2004, 11:16 PM   #2
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make sure you smooth this baby down one more time again cause now it looks like ehh....well ...it just doesn't look right...hehe :nervous: ...
the things you said yourself is the thing I would comment about...keep on going with the detail and replace the plane ground with a other tex cause this is.....well...it isn't right :p keep us updated...
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Old 08-07-2004, 12:43 AM   #3
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Or convert it to sub-ds
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good start although you need to add lots of edges to sharpen it up. Add some to arount windows and to the rimholes.
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thx for comments...sure I will replace this ugly stone tex.
It was just a testing texture for the shader..

By the way...I've got some updates and will upload them later this day...(going to watch spider-man2 later - nice cg in it !!!)
did you know that the whole city is cg when spider-man is swinging through it.. )

sorry...drafted away from the thread !
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Hi..I've done a shader for the rims now and I changed the tires.

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MMM, I'd really sort those windows out, wheels look fine but if you're following a tutorial try and stick with it or you'll make yourself look a bit silly, no offence, just advice.

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And just a suggestion, finish the model, then texture.
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