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Old 06-12-2006, 04:09 PM   #1
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Hi everyone just thought I would post my first car been working on it for about 4 hours let me know what you think.

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Old 06-12-2006, 04:17 PM   #2
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Looks good so far, could you keep the image sizes to 640 x 480.

Also could you post jeut a shaded wire frame so that we can see the flow of geometry?

It appears to be nice and clean so far, keep it up!

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Old 06-12-2006, 04:27 PM   #3
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Hi Gster123 this is the same car with a wireframe hows the geometry !
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Looks great so far, nice and clean. Keep it up man!
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geometry looks good so far.
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Old 07-12-2006, 11:11 AM   #6
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the area whre the roof, beam surrounding the door and windshield intersect over the door looks a little sloppy. seems to be either some n-sided polys or possibly some unconnected verts. Looks from here you should easily be able to fix it with some mesh work.
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Old 07-12-2006, 02:11 PM   #7
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Thanks everyone for your feedback thought I would keep you up to date with how the models going ,

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And the wire frame version too
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