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Old 25-03-2008, 08:14 AM   #1
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A friend asked me to make a fruit bowl for him lesson. Here's a simply and quick job. let me know your opinion.
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Old 25-03-2008, 10:30 AM   #2
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Looks good, have you ever looked into SSS (Subsurface Scattering) as the cherries look like they could do with some light passing through them.

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cool - though i think the textures of the fruit could do with a bit of work - they all look a bit samey at the moment.
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thanks for your comments. i've just adjusted light and some textures, especially grapes. i think it's look like grapes now
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yeah - already looking better. what fruit is that in the middle? i think it still needs a bit of work - the color seems a bit strong and it also looks like it's sitting too upright, if you know what i mean.
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looking pretty decent

you could do with texturing the tip of the banana as it doesnt look real. Also maybe a bit of variation to the central fruit's texture might help.

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