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Old 03-02-2009, 08:11 AM   #1
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my last atempt at this went horribly wrong so here I go again except ill be changing the parts I don't like about the original
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Old 03-02-2009, 08:21 AM   #2
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Old 03-02-2009, 08:25 AM   #3
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Old 03-02-2009, 08:37 AM   #5
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Old 03-02-2009, 10:29 AM   #6
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Old 03-02-2009, 11:17 AM   #7
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nice work man couple bits that need tweeking but as a whole, a good car model
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looks nice, but some of the gaps between parts of the car are too big... Also, the rims pop out way too much...
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Old 09-02-2009, 10:10 AM   #9
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thanks for the comments guys didnt like the front part so i changed it abit
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Old 09-02-2009, 10:12 AM   #10
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looks cool so far man, only crit is that the writing on the tire wall looks too deep
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Hey, the thing i noticed most is where the boot and body work meets the edges/seems are really wide (as if it was poorly made) i would tighten them up. Appart from that looks great.

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ok took notice of the stuff that you didnt like so changed them abit and tweeked the body
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Old 11-02-2009, 07:24 AM   #14
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Its looking much better now. love the alloys too i would have the nuts inset into them but appart from that really nice work.

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