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Old 12-03-2007, 10:04 PM   #16
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Looking very good. How did you do the 'toon' effect, I've looked into this quite a bit but the examples i've followed turn out very poor and washed out.
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Old 13-03-2007, 12:07 PM   #17
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very cool model mate!

my one crit would be that I much prefer the chunky legs in your first post. The new legs just seem a bit too spindly.

Looking forward to seeing some progress.
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Really good, just try to make the arms size proporsional to the rest of the body, and make the butt a little smaller.....but it's becoming really nice :attn:
I do like the size of the original legs, so maybe try doing one with larger legs (more of a cartoon effect), and one normal like you have. The arms do need to be a tad longer, but I think (don't take me wrong) her butt looks fine. KUTGW!!

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Old 15-03-2007, 05:22 AM   #18
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Okey here are some corrections I made, thanks for the comments, specially GAMESTER. I made the arms a little more strong and also the butt, or hips.. more small.. I think is looking much better, so thanks for that. So some pics.. some commets?
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Old 15-03-2007, 05:24 AM   #19
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another one from the back.. I also use fg in these renders.
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I also make the lower part of the gear in the legs, a little wider, a little bigger.. but maybe Im gonna change something down there.. something is looking kind of odd there.
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And some wireframes for younglion.
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All the objects are sub'ds.. some of the are gonna end up been polys.. for the body I like to work with poligon smooth proxy mode.. for animation and taking out the uvs..
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new gear..
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And also the glove. I need some coments on this one, the propotions and that kind of stuff. maybe the fingers are to long?
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another one from a distance. what do u guys think? the proportions are good?
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