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Old 07-12-2010, 10:03 AM   #1
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Default M4 Carbine

Hey Lads,

Decided a few days ago to get back into some modeling haven't done any for about 2 years!

Thought I would shake the dust off with a small project of a M4 Carbine.

Constructive criticism is hugely appreciated... as I mentioned I have been out of form for a long time.

Cheers,

Andy
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Old 07-12-2010, 10:06 AM   #2
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Here is a Ref Image
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Old 07-12-2010, 10:07 AM   #3
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This is the WIP - (about 3 hours into it)
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Old 07-12-2010, 10:56 AM   #4
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Looks pretty good for three hours work, especially as you're a but rusty. I Look forward to seeing this one develop.

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Old 09-12-2010, 12:18 AM   #5
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Old 09-12-2010, 12:27 AM   #6
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Looking good so far, how about attaching a thumbnail to your first post.... keep the new forum nice and shiny... or I'll cut ya, I swear it!
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Old 05-01-2011, 02:32 AM   #7
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Update on how things are turning out I'm about half way through and would appreciate any comments or crits especially in regards to the wireframe from a texturing point of view.

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Ok so I have completed one side of the M4. However, there is still more detail that needs to be added. Any thoughts on crits are appreciated!
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It's looking really good but everything I see it, i'm drawn to the grip, specifically the backside of it. Although it looks great, I think rounding it out would make it even better. Being flat across the back like that would make it pretty uncomfortable to shoot after a day of battle.
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Old 23-01-2011, 06:40 AM   #10
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Old 09-07-2011, 02:13 PM   #11
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So I have has sometime this weekend to continue with the model... It's only been 4 or 5 months ! See below for some renders. I think im pretty much finished exept for a few details. After that I will begin texturing.

Please give comms and crits!
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Some more - Please let me know your throughts... I don't want to go onto texturing too early if the model isn't right.
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Old 09-07-2011, 02:58 PM   #13
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The magazine looks a bit wide other then that it looks good.......dave
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Also, could use some feedback on my wireframe before texturing.
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