whoa what a sad person....good work!

well as i said i like it much more when the model is lightened from the bottom....i like the new perspective more....keep on...and hope that i wont join the competition :P jk

two things:
1.I like the you see the lower body so uncomplete and i liek that u have shadows there...makes it more scary...definately gives you a plus in the final judgement.
2.try to create a...

try to make the blod on the floor more reflective and not so bright.also i wanted to say that your scene gets more and more to a Brutal scene instead of a scary scene...i dont know if this will be...

i would keep the bathroom and try to light the death body from the bottom then it gets this evil effect u have when its night and you narrate a history and you have a lamp on you chin shining...

whoa exxcelleent idea and dont forget adding footsteps to the bloodtrail texture!!also the already mentioned idea that the standing light on the right bottom should be the light source isv ery...

hey nice work!°! but id say either the head should hang down or it shall be connected to the wall also as the arms with an extra (Pflock [Thats German sry] )...also you should use a bit of fog...