Yeah, it's a little on the wet side, You should probably fiddle with the specular settings until you get a more matte look. Since the second to last one I think you just need some bangs and it would...

cool, here are a few things that I think could help you out with the eyes other than what I've already mentioned.

Since you've got such nice SSS going on on the face, try it out on the eyes. the...

I think the biggest problems with the eyeballs are that they're not the right color, they're a bit too large and spaced apart, and too far forward, which shrinks the thickness of the eyelids. I'd...