Beer glass scene creation
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# 16 12-03-2007 , 10:04 PM
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Looking very good. How did you do the 'toon' effect, I've looked into this quite a bit but the examples i've followed turn out very poor and washed out.


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# 17 13-03-2007 , 12:07 PM
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Originally posted by arran
very cool model mate!

my one crit would be that I much prefer the chunky legs in your first post. The new legs just seem a bit too spindly.

Looking forward to seeing some progress. user added image

Originally posted by Gamester
Really good, just try to make the arms size proporsional to the rest of the body, and make the butt a little smaller.....but it's becoming really nice :attn:

I do like the size of the original legs, so maybe try doing one with larger legs (more of a cartoon effect), and one normal like you have. The arms do need to be a tad longer, but I think (don't take me wrong) her butt looks fine. KUTGW!!

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# 18 15-03-2007 , 05:22 AM
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Okey here are some corrections I made, thanks for the comments, specially GAMESTER. I made the arms a little more strong and also the butt, or hips.. more small.. I think is looking much better, so thanks for that. So some pics.. some commets?

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# 19 15-03-2007 , 05:24 AM
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# 20 15-03-2007 , 05:28 AM
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another one from the back.. I also use fg in these renders.

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# 21 15-03-2007 , 05:30 AM
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I also make the lower part of the gear in the legs, a little wider, a little bigger.. but maybe Im gonna change something down there.. something is looking kind of odd there.

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# 22 15-03-2007 , 05:33 AM
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And some wireframes for younglion.

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# 23 15-03-2007 , 05:34 AM
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# 24 15-03-2007 , 05:36 AM
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# 25 15-03-2007 , 05:43 AM
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All the objects are sub'ds.. some of the are gonna end up been polys.. for the body I like to work with poligon smooth proxy mode.. for animation and taking out the uvs..

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# 26 16-03-2007 , 11:33 PM
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new gear..

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# 27 16-03-2007 , 11:35 PM
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# 28 16-03-2007 , 11:38 PM
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And also the glove. I need some coments on this one, the propotions and that kind of stuff. maybe the fingers are to long?

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# 29 16-03-2007 , 11:41 PM
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another one from a distance. what do u guys think? the proportions are good?

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# 30 16-03-2007 , 11:42 PM
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