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# 1 11-12-2007 , 08:11 AM
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Pen in Water

Started modeling this pen a while ago. Still a bit more to do.

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# 2 11-12-2007 , 10:44 AM
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looks good, what did you do to make the water?

# 3 11-12-2007 , 11:54 PM
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Thanx Altadena.
The water is just a dielectric material.


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# 4 12-12-2007 , 06:25 AM
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Did some more work on this. No background yet. I might throw in a store maybe. I don't know why, but the pen seems to change colors in the glass.

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# 5 12-12-2007 , 06:31 AM
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Heres the full scene.

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Small add-on.

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# 7 12-12-2007 , 05:19 PM
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going good so far !

# 8 28-12-2007 , 10:38 PM
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Added a dumpster to the scene and added a glass window onto the store. Does anybody think that the window is too reflective?

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The dumpster was a tad too big.user added image

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looks good so far, but a few things are bothering me..

1 - the table in the foreground looks too reflective.
2 - the jagged edge of the awning kind of looks odd - too big and uneven.
3 - why is there a dumpster next to a dining area? - eugh user added image
4 - the liquid in the glass looks odd - it seems to be dipping in the middle...
5 - last, why is there a pen in the glass?

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Originally posted by arran
looks good so far, but a few things are bothering me..

1 - the table in the foreground looks too reflective.
2 - the jagged edge of the awning kind of looks odd - too big and uneven.
3 - why is there a dumpster next to a dining area? - eugh user added image
4 - the liquid in the glass looks odd - it seems to be dipping in the middle...
5 - last, why is there a pen in the glass?

Oh, the dumpster was just there for showing off, I'm not gonna keep it there. At some point I would batch render so the camera would go around the back of the cafe. I haven't modeled the back of the cafe yet, so I just threw it out front. Those jagged edges were more of the same really- just placeholders for later. I'm really gonna put one of those triangular shaped ones, because there'll be less of a pain to map out. And, the table thing I guess I could fix.
I threw a pen in the water cuz I thought it'd be more spontaneous than a straw, but if its too odd, then I'll change that too. In the earlier posts, I messed up the meniscus of the liquid but I fixed it in the later posts though it's hard to see. Thanx for the crits.


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# 12 29-12-2007 , 06:53 PM
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This is the awning I was gonna use.

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# 13 30-12-2007 , 08:01 PM
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Fixed up a little.

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# 14 31-12-2007 , 03:50 PM
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nice but the cup part of the glass looks a little big

# 15 31-12-2007 , 05:13 PM
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First thing that i noticed is the fact that your scene is way too dark... even for a night scene. In a place like this you would have outdoor lamps, and other lights to illuminate the area for the customers... or what ever. Plus if you chose a daytime scene it would probably make things look allot better. Maybe try a physical Sun?

The Pen in water it's self looks pretty good, thought the glass texture isn't quite there, but i can't pin exactly what it is thats letting it down.

Other than that, the layout seems pretty good, and modeling is not too shabby either user added image


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