You're right, I'll fix that tomorrow.Originally posted by severinianthony
The main lighting (the lighting that is shining on the floor in the center, bottom-left) seems a bit too bright/intense; but that's just my opinion...
That's just the lamp's light shining on the page.Originally posted by wokendreams
The paper the music is on looks laminaited.
The only things you need to fix is the anti-aliasing, lights, and materials a little, the modeling looks good.Originally posted by wasatch5_sparticus
That's just the lamp's light shining on the page.
Thanks, Severinianthony, the sheet music pictures! I'll probably replace some of those pages and anti-alias my pics more. I know the shadows are quite pixely, so I'll fix that tomorrow too.
Please continue to critique! I enjoy suggestions that can aid in the improvement of my projects. How do you like the modelling? Would you like some more pictures?
Sparticus
Somewhat fixed...Originally posted by Jr.Who
The only things you need to fix is the anti-aliasing, lights, and materials a little, the modeling looks good.
Looks better! Now all you have to do is put an image on the book to the right, and anti-alias it.Originally posted by wasatch5_sparticus
Somewhat fixed...
Okay, I'll try adding a script page to the book, and see what it's like after that. All I did to fix the shadows is change their filter amount, and that made them look really smooth. It was at a one, and that left the pixelly look, and so I upped it to a four, and it looks alright. I thank you all for the comments and suggestions! Please feel free to continue the critique and in case I don't see you; good after-noon, good evening and good night!Originally posted by Jr.Who
Looks better! Now all you have to do is put an image on the book to the right, and anti-alias it.