Sweet! looking forward to it!

This shows a lot of promise:)

Looks pretty fun, cant wait to see you start work on it.

Cool:)

Well, if you are back far enough so that it looks like you are/were a hiker going through the woods when you noticed through the trees that the creature was surfacing, that might sell better.
i.e....

Well, lets start from scratch.

What is your object?

Is it a character or an object like a big ship, or some non-organic object?

Well, I guess the biggest question of all is are you going to be moving the camera?

I would really suggest you "lock-off" the camera, i.e. set it on a tripod, frame your shot, and shoot.

Then...