Looking really good! I have to agree with Kurt here, pull the forehead out some...or not, it's your creation
Darkon
Red bellows of flame have blackened my stones
Convulsing my frame and cracking my bones
Hell's dragons of steel who roar in their chains
Crawl into my caves to suck out my veins.....
Darkon + Kurt: in comparison to human fysiognomy you are right, but this is an Orc and I do like these creatures stupid and looking brutish DD Otherwise thanks for critisism
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