It's looking good!

I dunno what I think about the floor, personally. I mean, it's a little bit grungy, and kind of mixed with a clean modern kitchen. It certainly adds color, but in my opinion, it's a kind of interesting mixture.

Everything looks great though! Heh, you should do a shot with the lights on, so we can see all of that amazingly perfect looking stuff you've made. A night shot would make them not so visible!


Super awesome job though

5/5

looking great but i think theres too much "green" in the scene
anyway keep up the good work

looking great but i think theres too much "white" in the scene
anyway keep up the good work



hehe, sorry, couldn't resist :p

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Thank you guys for the crits and comments. I have since toned down the green to a hue thats less "in your face" so to speak and boosted the tile to grout ratio. When I initially thought about this scene, I really just wanted clean look with green and white with some stainless steel, brushed metal in the setup. I' m a little pissed off right now since Maya just up and freakin' crashed, my pain killer just wore off and this damn movie I have going in the back isn't making much sense lol.

Anyways, made a new tile texture. Heres a snip.

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the tiles look much better this way, the earthy tone makes more sense now...

no other crits at this point... to lazy to come up with anything:zzz:

ahh that's better. The edges of the tiles though are darker green... it seems a little dirty? Was that your intention or not?

It looks great though, keep it up.

Looks good, if I find the link i'll post it up for you but its a dude who's done soe great interior renders throughout the day for various rooms etc etc, he's linkwed somewhere on my portfolio.

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@ acid, Thank you <3

@ Bluethunder, no thats not grunge, if it were grunge I'd dirty up the grout also. I just didn't want one flat color for the tiles. I don't much care for the compression in this image, I saved it right out of SnagIt.

@gster, thanks I always like a nice interior render.

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Ah, well now that I look at it more.. it looks fine!

eh I guess what prompted me to first think that was the green. I guess the green kinda triggered something in my brain -.-

awesome job so far. What else are you going to improve? i suggest power outlets, as mentioned before. that is, if you didn't already add them in.. i didn't see them.

cheers!

There are outlets, there is even a light switch, but thats on the right wall, I'm probably going to move it over next to the fridge.

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this is VERY cool and what i would expect from you.., though i know you can do better

Im wondering, are you happy with this 3 point perspective.., personally i think it destroys it. Changing your focal length from what looks like default (35mm) to 70-100, and then position the scene back to how it is now.., and you should lose the lens distortion (three point perspective).

works for me.., but then again.., mine taj model is scaled to over 40 foot.., so you might need different focal lengths.

just my 2 cents worth my friend.

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Thanks Mirek lol yeah I kinda liked the distortion its actually a wee bit more than default, I had tried it with different settings like in a couple of the earlier shots, though I liked that look too (I might do some of that at a later point) I decided I liked the distortion more. I don't like to half-ass my efforts (for the most part) but I have to put things to rest, I'm enjoying this project still but the next stuff I post will be the final images.

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all sounds good

how big is the scene actually..., say from one end of the kitchen to the other???

Mirek

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Its like 130 x 250 if I remember correctly.

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that would be centimeters?? no??

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