hi,

heres some wip im currently working on, its a toy plane which when finished will whizz around on a string from a ceiling. Im trying to obtain a real cartoony feel for the plane and have a lot more to add to it. let me know what ye think..

Nice start.

Nurbs?

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https://www.defendamerica.mil/nmam.html

the body and exhaust are nurbs, wings and prop poly's.

ive added some more bits and bobs to this one, suggestion/comments??

Looks good so far.

The wings need to have more of a "teardrop" shape.

Bigger in the front and skinnier in the back.

I like the pipes coming out of the front. Makes the plane look real fast.

Good job.

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https://www.darrylworley.com/

https://www.defendamerica.mil/nmam.html

Well here it is near completion, im working on texturing it and a bit more detail, comments/suggestions??

It's looking good, a great cartoony feel. Looks like it should hanging on a string above a cradle. Maybe a couple more shots at different angles would help with suggestions, but from that angle, looks great.

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the front wheels should be farhter apart. Have you made the stick yet?

And you shoudl change it back to the blue color. it looked shibby.

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well if you go back to blue, keep the glossyness where it is i think its pretty plastic.

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