Introduction to Maya - Modeling Fundamentals Vol 2
This course will look in the fundamentals of modeling in Maya with an emphasis on creating good topology. It's aimed at people that have some modeling experience in Maya but are having trouble with complex objects.
# 1 17-02-2008 , 11:54 AM
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Fighter Plane

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# 2 17-02-2008 , 01:20 PM
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The plane looks great,altough i think the wings should be longer and the "fire" from the projectiles looks strange,other than that it looks great.

# 3 17-02-2008 , 01:51 PM
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Looks good, maybe a tweek on the lighting etc and a bit more texture to the missile trials would really pop it out.


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# 4 17-02-2008 , 04:32 PM
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If you motion blur the missiles, and do some work on their trails you should get a really nice piccy.

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PS. I find that shots usually look a bit tacky with the lens flare stuff but thats more personal preference than anything.

# 5 17-02-2008 , 05:33 PM
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yes - nice job, though as the others have said, the missile trails really need some work - it just looks too solid and not really like smoke. definitely agree with bending about the lens flare - it just seems a bit obvious and doesn't look very accurate as i imagine the lens flare would be linked to the light from the missiles. i might lose the flare and trails completely.

the plane looks good though - lets see some more views and wireframe. user added image

# 6 17-02-2008 , 08:03 PM
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# 7 23-02-2008 , 07:07 PM
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its a very nice yet but like the others said the wings are a little short, the trail is simple and the lens flare is misplaced but beside that its a nice render gj user added image


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# 8 25-02-2008 , 01:56 AM
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i dont think its the wings that are short- the missle trails are obscuring them

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