Looks pretty good. But if I can crit, I think the nose is too small also the back of the head is out of proportion. Also, take a look in the mirror at how the back part of your jaw attaches to your head. It makes a nice smooth transition straight up into the head. the neck also looks to be a little too large.
Cheers,
Penguin

very stylish head, I like it

with reference to the back, check your muscles to this image and see what I mean, specifically the neck downwards with the triangle shape. It might help understand how the rear deltoids (shoulder muscles) sit

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thanx a lot for comment.i will try to correct thes error.

could you post an unsmoothed wireframe in the front and the sideview of the head ?

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could you post an unsmoothed wireframe in the front and the sideview of the head ?

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here it is

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side

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my future project is to create a hockey player so i have done his skate(vectore).i think this is good for now.not finished yet.

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skate vectore 2

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EDIT: Nevermind.

post a wire, some edges could be sharper.

Dae

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here is the wire of the skate.

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wire 2

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little update

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update 2

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