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# 1 11-12-2006 , 12:53 PM
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My 1st Animation project Please Give Feedback


# 2 11-12-2006 , 02:40 PM
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Hehe kind of funny. The modeling could be better but I like how you animated and modeled the people and the bus. The only thing that needs work is the sound and the storyboard. The point is lame. Also the sound could have better transitions then just cut and go and the quick fade out and in.


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# 3 12-12-2006 , 10:00 AM
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dude you posted this animation a while back and you didn't listen to a lot of our criticisms from last time.

stop
using
different
music
for
each
camera
cut
!

it's VERY distracting and frankly annoying. heck even the repetitive boink noise as the H + C = SL gets old after the + falls. the actual sound effects you have in the animation are fine, just either lose the music entirely, or pick a song and stick to it!!

the animation on the bike as the kid comes to a stop and the girl gets on isn't too bad, but it could be improved on. it's not very fluid. the stopping to check out your contact info is tacky, too. leave your contact info for at the beginning or at the end. don't try to incorporate it into your animation, especially since the time you took do fit that in could have been spent on improving the quality of the animation... which you apparently haven't done since the last time you've run it through here anyway.


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# 4 13-12-2006 , 07:35 AM
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He's posted it using a different name this time and he's also posted it under chat as well!!

come on Boomerlrr - let's see something new mate.

# 5 20-12-2006 , 05:05 PM
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haha yeah your right, no wonder i seen this vid before user added image please dont double post again Boomerlrr, thanks

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