Hey man you did a real good job on your first highpoly head! Ive been making alot of heads the past few days just trying to master edge looping before I make gollum for the challenge. Anyway, alot of the things that I want to point already have been said by kbrown. But here are some things:
On the front and side view image, near the top of the neck below the jaw, the muscle/bone?(i dont know what its called) is too sharp as if he is flexing his neck.
The adams apple area, around it, the shape looks a bit wide..I dont know how to explain it...I guess ok, go in front of a mirror and rotate your head on the X axis -30 degrees up and feel your adams apple area from top of the neck going down and you will see the shape that im trying to say..Compare it to the shape of the same area in your front view and youll see what i mean.
The jaw area, looking at it in front view it looks kinda like a flat fat maybe because of the dimples area being pushed into the mouth..
Ok maybe I shouldnt have tried to explain things cuz my english is real bad..But i hope you did understand the stuff i was trying to say.
Real good job though! Way better than my first head
<a href="https://forums.simplymaya.com/showthread.php?s=&threadid=16675">May/June 2005 Challenge Entry</a>